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Lost by ~erika18:iconerika18:

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Fighting you doesn’t feel right,
But I can’t seem to give up this fight,
I want to tear away, to break away,
Feelings fly, they just can’t stay.

Where am I? Who am I?
What I am? I cry…

Sink deeper, fly higher, run faster,
See me, see them, hazy visions.

No, yes, do what’s right, do what’s best.
But what is that? Which road? Which way,
I miss home.

No, that’s wrong, even if this is right.
I scream, I kick, I flee, and I fight.

Silence, screaming, they’re both the same.
I look through the haze and I hear my name.

Who’s calling? I don’t know.
I can’t hear their voices.
But I know every word.

I don’t know you.
…No, I know I do.

Why? And here I am again,
Falling…falling…drifting…
Yet, on solid ground again.

No more, keep going,
I’m blind and I see too much.

NO!
©2008-2009 ~erika18
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Submitted: May 10, 2008
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Yeeeah, another one of my old poems I never posted. Don't really remember how old. It was buried with "The Friend I Wish I Had," so I ended up giving it some minor touch ups and I said I'd post it. So, to state the obvious, I did.

Change: While this was written before I ever played KH I, I've decided to dedicate this to Roxas of Kingdom Hearts II.

:iconerilisvampyre: made me do it! ...Okee, not really, but she helped. :XD:
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=x-x-sakura-x-x:iconx-x-sakura-x-x: May 11, 2008, 4:07:44 AM
This is quite good. I think with most poets, Lost is a common title, but you really did it justice. Well done! :clap:

--
♥ Sarah-Jayne

You want me
~ErilisVampyre:iconErilisVampyre: May 11, 2008, 6:51:18 AM
Very good. It has all the feel and imagery of being lost.

It actually reminds me a lot of Roxas...especially when he is being confronted by Axel, in the beginning of KHII. What do you think....and you Hetem?

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~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
~erika18:iconerika18: May 11, 2008, 7:14:36 AM
Thank you. ^_^

:O_o: I don't know why I never thought of that before, but yeah, it does remind me of him...*will now probably think of Roxas every time I see this in my gallery * :giggle:

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If you were killed today, I'm sorry I wouldn't be able to come to
your funeral, because I'd be in jail for killing the person who did
it.
~ErilisVampyre:iconErilisVampyre: May 11, 2008, 7:42:38 AM
AhHa...*grin*....:poke: I knew it would. ;)

You're welcome.

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
~erika18:iconerika18: May 11, 2008, 1:36:24 PM
:giggle: :XD: Sneaky.

Thanks for faving, too.

--
"You drive, I'll pray."
"What, don't you trust my driving?"
"Well, don't you trust my praying?"

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~ErilisVampyre:iconErilisVampyre: May 12, 2008, 8:17:38 AM
;) Yes.

You're welcome.

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
~erika18:iconerika18: May 14, 2008, 3:55:56 PM
^^; I didn't really think about the title being cliche. I'm glad you thought so. :bow:

--
"You drive, I'll pray."
"What, don't you trust my driving?"
"Well, don't you trust my praying?"

Want a bite?: [link]
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